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Reflections from York FoW part 1: How many storylines can you fit in a Story?

4 Apr
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York Festival of Writing, organised by the fabulous Writers Workshop (www.writersworkshop.co.uk) has been and gone for another year.  It was an amazing weekend full of inspiring sessions and workshops and a tremendous buzz – the like of which you can only get when you put 300 or so authors, agents, publishers and writers-aspiring-to-publication in one place.

So now, a week later, I’m ready to put my reflections on the three wonderful days into words.  In this post I’m reflecting on the first workshop I attended, the Screenwriting Masterclass with Ashley Pharaoh, creator of Life on Mars, Ashes to Ashes, and other ground-breaking shows.

Firstly it was a fantastic session, delivered in a wonderfully down to earth way by someone who obviously has a huge amount of passion for his craft.

There were a few lightbulb moments for me in this session:

Conflict: if conflict is inherent in the story set-up it makes for tension from the start

Scene design: start as late and leave as early as you can from the scene – it cuts out the boring bits!

How many storylines can you fit in a story? As a novelist I feel pretty chuffed if I’ve got four running through the story.  But when we looked in detail at the first six minutes of an episode of Life on Mars, by the sixth minute we found there were seven, yes that’s right, SEVEN storylines in play.  Pretty cool stuff!

I left the session inspired to put into practice the things I’d learned in my own writing.

Screenwriting looks and sounds really interesting too.  Maybe I’ll have a go at that once I’ve finished my novel!

Filthy-gorgeous Villains: Who’s your inspiration?

5 Mar

My WIP centers around a love triangle. This means one of my challenges has been to create a wonderfully naughty villain who the reader can believe my female lead would fall in love with, but isn’t so fantastic that they can’t understand why she can’t be with him.

This was pretty hard at first.  How could I create a multi-dimensional character that provokes both love and hate?

 

Sylar

One of the exercises I found useful was to reflect on the things I find most engaging (in an antagonistic way!) about my favorite villains from TV and film.  The characters I chose were:

 

  • Sylar from Heroes (for his conflicted mind and need for control)
  • Sawyer and Sayid from Lost (not really villains, but both with a shadow-side at times)
  • James Bond (Yes, I know he’s the hero, but the charming vs killer aspect is interesting to ponder)
  • Patrick Bateman from American Psycho (ditto the charming vs killer stuff!)

Once I’m recognized the type of traits I wanted my villain to have I drew a mind-map of the various aspects of his character, personal preferences and appearance, and free-wrote a paragraph on what it would be like to have a conversation with him.  I then created a character biography, which included everything from his date of birth, family history, education, friends and goals/aspirations.

And, when I read it back, I knew I’d found my villain:  on the outside Leo appears charming in a true-gentleman way – he’s confident, intelligent and, of course, gorgeously handsome.  But, as the story progresses, the reader begins to see other, less attractive, aspects of his character emerge – the manipulative double-crossing of his friend and colleague,  the need to always be ‘in control’, and the rather extreme games he plays to get a power kick.

He’s certainly a filthy-gorgeous villain, and wickedly fun to write too!

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